Lust, A Favor of Ares Novel: Chapter 1 (1st Draft)

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Here is the first draft of the chapter 1 of Lust.  This chapter was reviewed by a professional editor and two other writers.  I took their suggestions and cut out most of it for the second draft (which will be available for $5.00 patrons.)  I took one of the reviewer comments pretty hard, but any criticism is good and helps you become a better writer.  I hope you enjoy this very rough draft and the process of becoming a writer.  Thank you for your support

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